When things are right
I see rays of light dance across the bay
Music carries my day
I’m right at home
At home in my heart
And I rightly shine
Until I don’t
When things are right
Morning light marks the new day
Bringing the come what may
The world seems lush green
And wills my being
Until it won’t
When you and I are right
I am never happier in the worst of storms
The world and I get along fine
I can be what I am
Am what I be
That is
until
I’m not
Well said!
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I dig it..."that is until I'm not" ...I dig that line the most ;)
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I like the environmental part the most.
ReplyDeleteWhen things are right
Morning light marks the new day
Bringing the come what may
The world seems lush green
And wills my being
Until it won’t
Lovely. Just lovely. Tugs at the strings of my heart, and I'm not at all being maudlin.
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Neat poem.
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Very nice poem. I like. Thanks.
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